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Dreams WIP

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A scrap I've been working on. I just can't seem to make it work. I might pick it up later. The goal was to create something softer than usual.

Adobe CS4

EDIT:: Made some subtle changes
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I am good with Characters, So some advice if you care to have it! In my opinion it's not working out cause she looks like a Mature Stalwart Strong type of woman' it seems like something she would never wear... I can hear her screaming inside..., i'd either make a new woman to wear this dress' face more innocent and fragile glossy cheeks and maybe younger...oh and blonde hair

if you can not be bothered to redo that lol. If not then add to this woman the element of white ribbons soft pink or sky blue trim' around her muscles in upper arms below shoulders aligning her breasts. White flowers intwined in her hair and she may need a nice soft silver necklace with a light colored Jewel or a white lace around her neck.

She feels the dress is to simple but in my opinion she looks gorgeous . Good Job.