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:iconlithriel:
A scrap I've been working on. I just can't seem to make it work. I might pick it up later. The goal was to create something softer than usual.

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EDIT:: Made some subtle changes
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:iconalsii:
very nice
Thank you!
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:iconmichael7s:
Mood: Wow! ~Michael7S Apr 13, 2011   Interface Designer
;) :rose:
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:iconaddyrae:
~AddyRae Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It seems like her neck and head are a little off center from her shoulders and torso? It might be that I'm seeing this in the build up of muscle on the left side (looking at her, not her left) not matching what is on the right, but her head doesn't line up where I would expect it to be... a little too high and to the right.

I see that it was pointed out that her right arm might do better with more contrast and sharpness; I would extend that to her side where it seems like her bodice blends seamlessly into her skirts. I agree that if your included her hands that would help as well. Right now I keep focusing on where her hands hit the skirts.

I love the pastels, and her face is gorgeous. Please don't think that I don't! I hope that you finish this piece. :)
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:iconlady-bug-2004:
She's perfect. Her shoulders are incredibly gorgeous. Her expression is magnificent. I read you say you cant seem to make it work. If you allow me to say, I think the only thing that could make it better would be to give her balance by making her waist more vertical. It's just a thought. I don't mean to be rude. You're an inspiration =)
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:iconlithriel:
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.
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:iconlady-bug-2004:
She's perfect.. You say you cant seem to make it work.. She has beautiful majestic shoulders and chest.. If i were you, i'd support that with a slightly wider waist. To balance her body, i'd put her waist more vertical. the stripes of her dress are the verticallity reference.
It's just a thought.. I dont mean to be rude or anything.. You're an inspiration. =)
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:iconmystical-desires:
This is beyond gorgeous even though this isn't completed yet!
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:iconaliciamariecreations:
~AliciaMarieCreations Jan 4, 2011   General Artist
Can't wait to see this finished. I like this a lot right now, the soft brushes and colors you used are beautiful.
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~Ouchez Dec 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow awesome. Just watched a movie about ballerinas and now I will never think of them the same way again however....
Love the picture though the colours are amazing. :)
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:iconevavester:
Beautyful!!!:heart:
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