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She's got no grip. See my comment on one of your other works, "Damian Torn World" for how a sword should be gripped. The fingers also should not be too tight together, as the flesh spreads a little when gripping a handle with strength.
Also, based on the shadows, it appears as though her feet are almost in-line with one another; this is a no-no. Keep the toes pointed in the same direction, but move the right foot to the character's right by one shoulder-width.
Her's a diagram for a virtually identical karate stance:
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Nice work!